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Drained
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He grabbed me round my slender neck, I could not call or scream! He dragged me to his dingy room Where he could not be seen. He tore away my flimsy wrap And looked upon my form. I was so cold and wet and scared, Whilst he was hot and warm. His feverish lips he pressed to mine I gave him every drop He drained me of my very self I could not make him stop He made me what I am today That's why you find me here A broken bottle, thrown away That once was filled with beer....R.

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::Vickid
05/06/24 10:13 AM GMT
Being able to communicate on different levels is interesting. Your capture and message are an example of a unique and mind blowing insight. This is superb, the message comes across perfectly. Favorite.
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::tigger3
05/06/24 12:02 AM GMT
What a terrific story line to go with this one R. ...S.
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.LynEve
05/06/24 12:49 AM GMT
Well they saying goes empty vessels make the most noise but not this one - it has met its bitter end :) A great insightful image !
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::corngrowth
05/06/24 3:34 PM GMT
Richie, I don't feel sorry for the thrown away bottle, because that's a dead thing. In contrary with the person who consumed its contents, because if I interpreted your story correctly, then I don't rule out that it's an alcoholic.
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.icedancer
05/06/24 4:22 PM GMT
Love the story and makes me think the bottle is actually talking to me
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::trixxie17
05/06/24 7:39 PM GMT
Very clever take on an empty bottle!
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