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Ended 03/14/12 3:15 AM GMT
Winner: LynEve (See the full results)

1st place
Time In A Bottle by LynEve

tanimara: Brilliant - what more can I say!

icedancer: Magnificent entry and really do like this. Good Luck

trixxie17: Love the song and love this entry Lyn - very clever.

Flmngseabass: Well, there you have it, your the winner!!!!!! Congratulations Lynn on placing 1st and deservingly so:):)

LynEve received a 2 month membership in the Caedes Cadre.

2nd place
Time Passing by coram9

rvdb: Congrats on your win Chris.

Rob

Digital_Angel: Chris,

I like this image a lot, from the muted colors to the composition.

I do have two crits though:

1. Not sure if you could do this, but if the DoF were a little longer into the clock from the 12 towards the center I think it would cut a little into the mainly blurry image, creating a little more depth and visual interest.

2. The area in focus could be sharpened a little, which helps with crit #1

Just my opinion of course :)

coram9 received a 1 month membership in the Caedes Cadre.

3rd place
A Month in the Life of the Moon by Akeraios

Samatar: This reminded me of the work first of Vladstudio, then of NMSmith... enough said, I think. Very nice.

LakeMichigan: Congratulations on the Time contest.

purmusic: Really nice work, Hannah.


If I may.. composition.

In my humble opinion, think you could make some 'minor' (on the notes of your concept and overall presentation) changes.

Moon ... smaller.

Allowing for the Xaos fractal to provide stronger leading lines within frame, prodding your viewer's eyes to look into your piece.. deeper. As they are a nice touch.

Add some more depth, in short.

And in turn, knock down the moon's prominence (visual weight), too.


Will summarize my thoughts here.. in a popular phrasing..

'+favs for me.'


Best of luck in the contest with this very strong creative contender. :o)

5th place
A Time to Remember by johindes

sahadk: Wonderful presentation,nice tribute and great work Jo.

0930_23: Such a waste men dying in wars in this day and age BC. A very great tribute to both them and your Grandad.

TicK


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